Unnoticed

This is a rough draft of mixed emotions and tender affections that may be crumpled by the one who ought to receive it. I wrote it while waiting for a dumb acrobatic show to start at our school.

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Unnoticed

I pretended to be strong

But I guess I was wrong

I can’t stay like this for long

In a melodramatic song

Even lunatic clowns can’t make me happy

Maybe it’s meant to be

You and I… we’re torn by destiny

Your smile… it’s killing me

Beautiful is the pain

Like I’m always crying in the rain

Though it’s kind of insane

To be hurt when she calls your name

Words are left unspoken

Is this hell or heaven?

To let my heart be taken

By someone who has left me forsaken.

1 Response to “Unnoticed”


  1. 1 tina January 23, 2009 at 4:45 am

    wow! ang hanep…you are impressive but unnoticed!!! :)

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